Right Name, Wrong Man

The Chateau where my story takes place

What do the words France, Paris, Eiffel Tower, Loire Valley, evoke for you?

Do you think romantic settings? Visualize historical chateaux? Imagine a kiss at the top of the Eiffel Tower? Prepare your camera to snap pictures of the amazing architecture? Get ideas from the fashion capital? Prepare yourself to taste and enjoy the French Merlot, Cabernet sauvignon, Beaujolais Nouveau, Bordeau… Are you feeling fuzzy, maybe a little drunk?

After many visits to France—I stopped counting years ago— I can still rhapsodize about Paris and its thousand attractions. The Loire Valley, known as “the Garden of France”, was the favorite residence of the Kings of France during the Renaissance period. They made this peaceful countryside the setting of their dreams, and surrounded themselves with the greatest artists and architects of this era.

When my husband treated me to a special thirtieth anniversary with a trip to the Vallée de la Loire and a two-day stay in an authentic chateau, I fell in love with the area and have never forgotten it.

RIGHT NAME, WRONG MAN, my new contemporary  romance is set in this chateau. The count who owns the chateau is a handsome doctor adored by patients and nurses. Only one woman can’t seem to stand him because…

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Short Synopsis:

What’s a girl to do when she whispers another man’s name in her fiancé’s arms?

When forbidden dreams about the sexy French Dr. Yves Malroux assail her at every turn, Mary-Beth puts her wedding plans on hold.  She signs up for a summer training program in surgery with Yves, and flies to France to confront her past and the man who broke her heart years ago.

But she never expected the French doctor–who’s also a count– to insist on his trainees staying at his historical chateau. Sleeping under his roof, next door to his bedroom, is more temptation than Mary-Beth anticipated. Desire for Yves burns as hot as ever, especially when he focuses all his charm on Mary-Beth to convince her she needs passion in her life. While too many questions still swirled in her mind, her jealous fiancé summons her back home.

Will Mary-Beth let her heart decide who’s her right man? Will Yves break his no-strings-attached rule to offer love and commitment?

 Excerpt from Chapter Two

“Welcome to France, Dr. Drake.” Stepping back to allow her entrance to his office, Dr. Malroux treated her to the mind-boggling smile he’d probably bestowed on countless beauties he’d escorted.

Rooted in the doorway, Mary-Beth stared at the man she had snatched from her heart a year ago. A day’s worth of stubble shadowed his jaws and a lock of dark hair wandered over his forehead. Damn, he was even more handsome than in her nightmares.

“Good afternoon.” She couldn’t mutter another word as her eyes fell on the surgical top stretched over his muscular chest. Heat bloomed throughout her body. She clenched the straps of her purse and willed her stupid heart to slow down, certain that the thumping could be heard in the silence.

With effort, she recalled the assertiveness she’d painfully acquired over the previous year and extended her arm for a handshake. “I’m here for the summer residency program organized by Dr. Steve Galt fromMassachusetts GeneralHospital.”

Standing too close, he shook her hand and held it an extra second. His sandalwood cologne enveloped her. The familiar scent from her days at Harvard Library sent her pulse into overdrive.

“Yes, I know. I received your impressive curriculum vitae,” he said with the delightful French accent that had resonated in her ears months after he’d leftBoston. “Please, have a seat,” he added, indicating the brown velvet chair in front of his desk.

She hastened to sit and put her oversized purse on the carpet. Her back straight, she clasped her hands together in her lap and crossed her ankles to prevent the anxious tapping of her feet.

He sat behind his desk and leaned back in an imposing leather chair that enhanced his confident stature. His gaze ambled, paused and assessed. “Dr. Drake, I am delighted you will be working with us at the Hôpital de la Santé.

He doesn’t recognize me.

Maybe it was a good thing he didn’t recognize her as the heavy frump from the past. Pleased that she had a chance to start her training without painful reminiscences, she suppressed a smile of relief and bore the weight of his scrutiny without flinching.

His forehead pleated in a thoughtful frown as he opened the folder on his desk and perused her application. “You mention you decided to train with us to improve your skills in General Surgery. Anything else?”

“I also would like to train in Pediatric and Cardiac surgery.” And prove that I’m immune to your charm and marry Steve without reservations. Her voice firmed up as she rubbed her ringless finger. 


I changed the picture of the book cover twice, and I’m still not sure which one would suit the story better. Help me choose? Or should I change to a new one?

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9 Responses to Right Name, Wrong Man

  1. martisima says:

    As far as the cover, it should be up to you. I like this one!

    Here are the FIVE books I have bought:

    1- The Merzetti Effect [Kindle Edition] Order #: D01-3802821-8058239
    2- Counterfeit Love [Kindle Edition] Order #: D01-6735887-6855005
    3- Wild for You (Tropical Heat Series, Book One) [Kindle Edition] Order #: ++ D01-8847303-4247010
    4- BE MY GUEST [Kindle Edition] Order #: D01-0674925-1584624
    5- Satisfaction Guaranteed [Kindle Edition] Order #: D01-8818377-7047045

    The one I request as a free book is, naturally, Right Name, Wrong Man

    email: mfrances@gmu.edu (Martha Paley Francescato)


  2. martisima says:

    OUCH! I had already bought this one, You purchased this item on December 2, 2011.Order #: D01-1378581-6947820

    So, I would like to have Christmas in Bayeux [Kindle Edition]

    email: mfrances@gmu.edu (Martha Paley Francescato)


  3. marymarvella says:

    Mona I have liked all the covers. I saw nothing wrong with the first one.

  4. monarisk says:

    Hi Martha, I will send you Christmas in Bayeux at the email address you left here.

  5. monarisk says:

    Martha, I already sent you Christmas in Bayeux. You should receive it now.

    • martisima says:

      Thanks! I have already received it and have accepted it, of course! I think I have bought almost all these books – a recent discovery. I love them!!! And I need to get to some of them yet…

  6. Nancy O says:

    Ah Martisima, I know all the authors are so appreciative. Thank you for all the support. These ladies are great.

  7. Jill James says:

    I’ve liked both covers.

  8. StephanieBurkhart says:

    Oh My Gosh, Mona, the picture is to die for. It’s very romantic in its own right? How could you not fall in love with that house…and the story? Sigh… Thanks so much for sharing.


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